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Once I had beauty.
Once I had youth.
There once was a time
When my heart was yet stained.

Broken and shattered
Like shards of glass.
They lay scattered
About the places I once knew.

Now what’s left of me
Remains hidden away,
Left to cut whoever
Dares to hold the key.

This face you once knew,
No longer the same.
This body,
A hollow shell.

To harbor the fear
Of a wretched old soul,
Wears on the mind
And numbness takes toll.

How we tend to drown
In countless memories.
May we find the strength
To swim ashore?

Once upon a time,
A flower was in bloom.
Now the winter season reigns,
And spring time, never more.
©2007-2008 ~cherrytoppedsundae
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this i wrote a few months back. it's a personal one that i happened to like and wanted to share. it is kinda funny, because i'm beginning to feel quite the opposite of the what the poem expresses. thats thanks to a certain special someone. <3 awww, how cute!
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~xCannibalVampire:iconxCannibalVampire: Dec 30, 2007, 10:05:25 AM
awwww <3
i know how that is :D
but im starting to worry >.<
bleh anyway
nice poem
I wrote one strangly similar to it before
great minds think alike?
:)

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Need more friends with wings,
All the angels I know put concrete in my veins...


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~cherrytoppedsundae:iconcherrytoppedsundae: Dec 30, 2007, 9:53:46 PM
thank you for the comment and reading! =) it means a lot! thats cool that you wrote something similar... although you shouldn't worry, life's too short (now if only i'd take my own advice =P). i'm glad you liked, and thank you again! <3
~xCannibalVampire:iconxCannibalVampire: Dec 30, 2007, 10:11:05 PM
lol
i never take my own advice
im such an idiot xP

:D

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Need more friends with wings,
All the angels I know put concrete in my veins...


I :heart: Micci & David